Monday, March 11, 2019

Sight - 101 Fiction


Kooky Clara draws a map, even though she can't read it. 

Jenny can, even though she's about to wish she hadn't. 

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16 comments:

  1. M.J. FifieldMonday, March 11, 2019 4:35:00 PM

    Love that teaser!

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    1. Madeline Mora-SummonteMonday, March 11, 2019 4:50:00 PM

      Thank you! It's not easy coming up with a teaser for a 100 word story without giving too much away. :)

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  2. Natalie AguirreMonday, March 11, 2019 6:28:00 PM

    Thanks for sharing. It was great!

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  3. J.H. MoncrieffTuesday, March 12, 2019 2:43:00 AM

    Wow, creepy as hell. It gave me literal shivers.

    Well done!

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  4. AnonymousTuesday, March 12, 2019 12:50:00 PM

    Interesting teaser.

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  5. AnonymousTuesday, March 12, 2019 6:26:00 PM

    Loved it! All the makings of a nightmare.

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  6. Tyrean MartinsonThursday, March 14, 2019 11:28:00 AM

    Nice work! I would love to know what happens next to Clara and Jenny - do they meet other survivors - are there other survivors? Will the basement become ... their final place? Will they get there?

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  7. Susan Flett SwiderskiFriday, March 15, 2019 5:02:00 PM

    I don't mean to be rude, but man! Was that every creepy! Nice job.

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    1. Madeline Mora-SummonteFriday, March 15, 2019 5:48:00 PM

      You should know by now that "creepy" is a compliment around here. :)

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  8. Christine RainsWednesday, March 20, 2019 9:26:00 AM

    Wonderfully creepy!

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