This time? Rounds. Four of them.
Round One: Prompt Word = bird, Number of Words = 30
Round Two: Prompt Word = ring, Number of Words = 25
Round Three: Prompt Word = colly, Number of Words = 25
Round Four: Prompt Word = sent, Number of Words = 20
Most of the usual rules applied along with a big twist: You could write individual stories each time OR build on a previous "starter" - yours or someone else's (with attribution, of course.)
It. Was. A. Blast.
I chose to build on my story. It was a risk because I didn't know what the next round's prompt word would be until it opened. I kept my story creepy (big surprise!) and my fingers crossed that I could make the prompt words work. My entry is below, and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it.
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Fog shrouds the house.
A bird flits by a window, the old glass broken from within.
The fog breathes, escapes.
The bird does not.
Inside, the occupants are still hungry.
Long ago, they gathered at the dinner bell's ring.
But the meal was not for them.
The only thing to grow up was their rage.
Now, they're the monsters. Cursed, caged.
Desperate, their tongues, long and twisted, bruised colly
and cobalt, lick the walls, tasting memories of blood and bone.
When they turn on each other, it's swift, unsentimental.
Only one remains.
She crunches her brothers' bones, satiated.
For now.
That is excellent! You fit in the four words so well. I think creepy is your thing.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Alex! And as weird as it might be, I like that creepy is my thing. :)
DeleteYou did really well! Flash fiction contests seems really hard to me so I'm very impressed with your story. Very creepy :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteThey can be hard, but don't rule out giving them a shot. Sometimes the theme, etc might be just the right spark for you. :)
Wow, I love this!! So impressed that you managed to include all the prompts in such a seamless way. Bravo!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Julie!
DeleteIt wasn't easy. Using "colly" was especially tough.
Doing rounds is more difficult. Well done, you!
ReplyDeleteI remember doing rounds with a contest Samhain ran. Each week for four weeks, you had to wow their editors with the first lines of your wip.
I won, having nothing more than those few lines. My friend pushed me into entering even though I had nothing more than an idea for a story. The editor waited for me to finish the novel and they offered me a contract within two days.
Wow, that is amazing! Good for you! :)
DeleteYou got all of them in! Great job too.
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
DeleteOoh, I like it. Very creepy, but still a fun read. It's got a great, Gothic atmosphere going.
ReplyDeleteLove the idea of the Gothic atmosphere - thanks, JH!
DeleteYou're very welcome! Sorry I got so far behind on your posts.
DeleteThat is a really creepy story. Sounds like the start of a Supernatural episode.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Susan! I actually have Supernatural on my Netflix list but haven't watch it yet.
DeleteI enjoyed your story so much. Dark and scary. I love it! You truly have a remarkable talent, Madeline. I hope you have a brilliant 2018.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Murees!
DeleteWishing you all the best for 2018!
Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteLOL! I know I shouldn't be laughing, but the sadistic twist makes me chuckle.
ReplyDeleteChuckle away, Crystal! :)
DeleteExcellent! I love creepy, with a twist, and you do not disappoint. This looks like fun - I must check it out.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lee!
DeleteI don't know if Ms. Reid will run this type of contest again, but she runs other flash fiction contests on her blog throughout the year.
That is awesome! I'm a fan of the creepy too.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Christine!
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