online home of Madeline Mora-Summonte, writer of dark fiction and horror
My first response about the saliva was "Ew!" Nice job!
I don't know if my comment went through...so....Great piece! :)
Emily - I'll take both comments - thank you! And thanks for reading. :)
Those last two lines were golden. I creepy little tale if ever I've read one.
Laurita - thanks! I love creeping people out in so few words. :)