Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Stranded


"Stranded" is up at One Forty Fiction. It's a Twitter-sized reminder of sorts, a reminder to pay attention, not only to the road itself, but also to those we can no longer see who travel with us just the same.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice one, Madeline. In regards to the homeless among us, that's one thing we hear every time we take our 7th graders downtown for a mission trip: with so many busy people ignoring them every day, the homeless begin to feel invisible, and they're often startled when we speak to them.

Madeline Mora-Summonte said...

Milo - thanks!

Your take on the story was different than what I was going for but I thought it was an interesting one. Thanks, as always, for reading. :)

Simon Kewin said...

Nicely done, Madeline. Evocative.

Madeline Mora-Summonte said...

Simon - thank you!

Empty Nester said...

Your talent amazes once again!

Madeline Mora-Summonte said...

Pam - thank you so much! :)

Stacy Post said...

Left a comment for you over at 140. Good job, lady!

Madeline Mora-Summonte said...

Stacy - thank you! And thanks for reading. :)

Cathy C. Hall said...

Oh, that last line, Madeline. Haunting.

Madeline Mora-Summonte said...

Cathy - thank you so much. I love hearing that something I wrote was "haunting" (but hopefully in a good way!)