Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Derelict - 101 Fiction


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An empty house. 

The theme? "Underground."

A homeless woman.

The word count? Exactly 100 words.

Playmates from Hell.

The title? One word only.



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24 comments:

  1. Alex J. CavanaughWednesday, September 09, 2015 8:08:00 AM

    Congratulations!

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughWednesday, September 09, 2015 8:08:00 AM

    Or are you entering? I think I just confused myself...

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  3. Nick WilfordWednesday, September 09, 2015 8:50:00 AM

    Congrats! That is superbly creepy.

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    1. Madeline Mora-SummonteWednesday, September 09, 2015 9:03:00 AM

      That's my kind of compliment - "superbly creepy." About a story, not about me. :)

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  4. Christine RainsWednesday, September 09, 2015 10:02:00 AM

    Congratulations! That is a creepy little piece. Love that description of the house.

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  5. Susan Gourley/KelleyWednesday, September 09, 2015 10:45:00 AM

    Loved it! I commented over there.

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    1. Madeline Mora-SummonteWednesday, September 09, 2015 10:53:00 AM

      Thank you, Susan! I'll head over and check out your comment....

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  6. Julie FlandersWednesday, September 09, 2015 11:27:00 AM

    Oh geez that was like a nightmare to me. You know my problems with satanic children from hell LOL.
    Great work as always!!

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  7. Donna VolkenanntWednesday, September 09, 2015 9:59:00 PM

    Congratulations and Yikes! Creative and creepy. I definitely did not see that ending coming.

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  8. Annalisa CrawfordThursday, September 10, 2015 10:41:00 AM

    Awesome! Well done :-)

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  9. Yolanda RenéeThursday, September 10, 2015 1:58:00 PM

    Beautifully done! Congratulations!

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  10. Simon KewinMonday, September 14, 2015 6:44:00 AM

    Great stuff!

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  11. SuziMonday, September 14, 2015 3:57:00 PM

    Wow. Those are playmates I don't want to have. :)

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