Tuesday, May 31, 2011

"Uncle Bo" At One Forty Fiction

My Twitter fiction, "Uncle Bo Blames the Girl," is up at OneFortyFiction.com! You can read it here.

It's my second story up at the site. The first was "Absolution" and I so appreciated the comments and feedback from you all and the readers over at One Forty Fiction. If you get a chance, let me know what you think about "Uncle Bo."

11 comments:

  1. LOVE it. Wonderful pithy use of a metaphor!

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  2. Thanks, Cathy! And thanks for using the word "pithy" - it's one of those words I like but I'm not exactly sure why... :)

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  3. Congrats on another story being picked up! Woo-hoo! I left a comment over there for you. Enjoy!

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  4. "Got a spoiled milk mind." Wow. Such a strong voice in only 140 characters or less!

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  5. Stacy - thank you! :)

    Milo - that image/line came to me awhile back and wouldn't go away. Glad it worked!

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  6. Oh -- and congrats on your May Marionette WIN!

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  7. Great stuff Madeline, such a strong voice. And congrats on the W1S1 May Marionette!

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  8. Thank you, Simon! Nice to see you here. And congratulations to you, too!

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  9. Really nice voice. And I love that you never say what he blames her for, but the whole thing hints that whatever it is, it's not her fault. No matter what we imagine, there's a big story under there. Nice job.

    And congrats on meeting your W1S1 goals!

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  10. Thanks so much, Shelley. I think that's what I love about twitter/hint/flash fiction - so much is said in so few words and yet there's even more going on beneath the surface.

    Congrats to you, too! :)

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